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School should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with the statemen.

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It is true that some parents and teachers try to force
children
 to learn
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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languages
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. Because they know that it is difficult to work without a foreign
language
 in today's life. In
this
 essay, I will examine how
this
 is true On the one hand, it is a good knowledge of
foreign
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the foreign
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language
. There are several reasons why
children
 learn another
language
. Students can learn about the culture of the country by learning another
language
.
On the other hand
, there are
also
 negative aspects of forcing
children
 to study. For
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instunce
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a
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children
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 cannot quickly learn something they are not interested in and a lot of time,
money
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 will be lost.
Moreover
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 the
children
learns
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 that their country is for from their culture.
Therefore
children
 should be consulted when learning other languages.
However
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 don't force
they
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them
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.
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