Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In about 300 words, give examples to support your ideas.

advertisement
is a selling strategy which promotes what companies intend to sell us. It is true that we are surrounded by numerous companies' advertisements. some
people
argue that advertising strategies succeeded in influencing
people
by their
advertisement
strategy while some other
people
believe that these methods are not impressive anymore and
people
do not pay attention to them.
this
essay intends to discuss both views and present my personal opinion on
this
topic. On the one side, we are under
advertisement
bombs every day which can impress us deeply as much as make us believe that we need a
product
when it is not necessarily needed o even useful.
This
advertisement
power can obviously be seen in social media platforms when they pay different influencers to make a trend among whom follow their content every day
such
as unnesseccery makeup trends created by beauty blogger's advertisements which have the power to make
people
that they extremely need to buy that
product
when by the yesterday no one has ever used that or even feel
such
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product
is useful
consequently
companies can gain high amount of profit and fame by persuading
people
using the
advertisement
. On the other side, some
people
defend the idea that
people
have passed from the golden
advertisement
age which means that they do not get impressed by promotions like before
this
change in
people
's behaviour has been seen in
an
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academic research which took place in London university and revels some highly important factors about
advertisement
initially
a major downward trend in
advertisement
influence power among some social groups
such
as
people
who got a high academic degree because
this
group pay a lot of attention to the
product
quality ,not the image that has been created in society by promotion. by considering both group point of view I personally assume that we are still under
advertisement
pressure and
people
get influenced by that while as much as
people
got more aware they pay less attention to these promotions.
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