In developing countries, rural children have less access to education.some people say that this problem is solved by providing teachers and schools. Other think that computer and internet should be provided. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that in order to give broader chance for better education to children from

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in developing countries, we need to build new schools and dispatch teachers to educate them.

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, there are people who believe that

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issue can be solved by offering them

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and

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.

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both approaches have their merits and disadvantages,

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, I believe the idea of giving kids online devices is a better remedy, considering its quickness and

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expandability. The

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strategy of establishing educational institutions and sending people to teach school students has its merit. The education will become intimate and

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. The children can learn how to judge good information from bad one before they face mass communication.

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, it has its drawbacks as well.

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solution takes time and money. It is not

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certain that they could find an adequate number of good citizens who can teach young learners. Building schools

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requires huge investment which may negatively impact developing countries' financial conditions.

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, the

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option of offering online solutions is much easier and quicker.

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, a developing country can purchase a large number of personal devices for school kids at

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and give them

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study programs.

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of taking time to build educational buildings,

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method is obviously much cheaper and quicker.

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, it has

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room for

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developments.

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students who want to extend their

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, the government can pick good programs from outside of the country,

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lectures from famous foreign universities and recommend them. Kids can learn how to handle

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the internet

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which will give them broad

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opportunities

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opportunities

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growth. In conclusion, of the two ideas to solve the educational issue of urban

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in developing countries, I believe the way to use

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and online

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devices

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is superior. It is not only quicker and cheaper, but it

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gives the children skills to learn from superb global educational institutions.

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, they can find options and opportunities for their

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career choices.