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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?

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These days a large number of
people
 prefer to
travel
 more than before. It's rooted in the Improvement of
people
's financial level that cusses them to visit more countries, know more cultures and gain different experiences. It seems that the world is dotted with a lot of complications, especially financial issues. When
people
 have a lot of problems they prefer to solve them to do other additional activities like
travel
.
In addition
, in deprived areas like some districts in the South of Tehran, insufficient incomes and high costs make a contribution to fixing only the basic needs. Apart from
this
, with better financial situation
people
 can allocate their money to other activities and get some rest. It seems to me that
people
's situation is better than before so they can
travel
 more. There is no denying the fact that, travelling brings great benefits to travellers. As a
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traveller you face a lot of challenges which exert a constructive effect on your life. In
this
 regard, it seems to me that around 50 years ago,
people
 who travelled to Mecca had a high position in the Iranian public eye.
This
 vision is rooted in some reasons.
First
, the religious aspect of
this
travel
 and
second
, the serious challenges which travellers should handle. Something like the length of the
travel
 and risk of bandits. Undoubtedly, learning is an integral part of
travel
. Travellers can learn from other passengers, local
people
, even nature, etc. Without a shadow of a doubt, there are too many reasons for
people
 to
travel
. Something like gaining some experiences which are useful to have a better life and it has a relaxing aspect too. But financial situations perform a key role in travelling. Most
people
 would rather manage their necessary problems than think about other things
although
 these days
people
 manage their problems more than before and totally they can have trips to other cities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Low-cost airlines
  • Globalization
  • Professional development
  • Social media platforms
  • Exotic locations
  • Cultural exchange
  • Personal growth
  • Adaptable
  • Open-minded
  • Mental health
  • Daily routines
  • Responsibilities
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