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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. -You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year

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Dear Sir / Madam, I have seen your advertisement regarding a requirement for an Arabic teacher for your two children for a year. I want to apply as I find myself suitable for the job. I am currently continuing my studies in Australia majoring in child education and will be living here for the
next
 2 years. I come from Lebanon where Arabic is my native language and studied it throughout my school years,
hence
 I consider myself quite knowledgeable in both, written and spoken Arabic.
Moreover
, I provided home tutoring for kids in the past year, and I am aware of the challenges that
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 with that. I can
also
 assist in their school assignments in your absence. I need
this
 job to help with my college tuition fees,
in addition
, it will provide me with
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 hands-on experience required for my degree. I am enclosing my curriculum vitae for your consideration. I am available to meet with you to discuss
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further
 detail at your most convenient time. Best regards, Houssam El Zein
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