The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Some changes have been made to the
road
to a city hospital. Use synonyms
Overall
, the original hospital Linking Words
road
in 2007 was narrow and intolerable in some ways, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
one
redeveloped in 2010 looks more spacious and well-organized.
The old hospital Use synonyms
road
from 2007 was not built in a reasonable way in that it had too many bus stops, which was unnecessary. Use synonyms
Besides
, Linking Words
one
side of the Use synonyms
road
was in unfavourable order since Use synonyms
car
park for both staff and the public was set in a crowded way. What's worse, Correct article usage
the car
such
construction might give rise to unwanted accidents and lead to a delay in saving Linking Words
life
.
The redevelopment of the Add an article
a life
road
in 2010 makes the situation much better. On the Use synonyms
one
hand, hospital staff and other individuals have their own independent car park, which may facilitate their trip. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the new Linking Words
road
has been rebuilt to be more flexible and the past small bus stops have been replaced by a bigger bus station.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, the new Linking Words
road
that leads to the city hospital is far better than the old Use synonyms
one
and it is of great importance to all the citizens.Use synonyms
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