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Dear Mr Marcon, My name's Murilo Siqueira and I've been living in Toronto since I got to Canada. Actually, I'm from Brazil. I was looking for a job position and my friend Thiago sent me the Manager position opportunity at your company, so would like to apply for it. In fact, it would be interesting for both of us. I've worked as

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for a long time, and for improving my skills I got two degrees, Marketing and Business Adm, and now I'm finishing my MBA in Project Manager.

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around 8 to 11 individuals and it helped me to develop abilities in my team. We got a lot of forward together. I appreciate it if you consider my resume, it seems that the job profile combines my soft and high skills and we both could gain and make a lot of

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, on the

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page of my curriculum, you'll see information about who worked with me in Brazil or Canada, and

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you can check the whole information as well. Regards, Murilo Siqueira

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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6 paragraphs

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You have seen an advertisement for a job position. Write an application letter.

Since it is so easy to reach a large audience on the Internet, people have to be exceptionally talented to become famous these days. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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