You made a mistake in classroom. Write a letter to your teacher. In the letter: State your apology Describe the situation Write about your promise to change. Write at least 150 words.

Dear Mrs Joana, I'
m
writing
this
email to you because I made a mistake during the class and I really like to apologise. As you know, I've been living in Canada for a
few
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time and many things
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hard for me yet.
Unfortunately
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I took a wrong decision and would like to fix it. I'
m
struggling a lot to boost my English level as soon as possible,
however
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it's not easy for those who have Portuguese as their
first
language. As you saw, during my presentation I got nervous because I couldn't explain the material that I worked around the clock to prepare
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show my best to classmates. I'
m
ashamed, but at the end of the story you know, I left the class in the middle of class. Well, I hope you accept my apology and understand why I toke that bad decision,
however
you'll never see it again.
Although
it's a challenge for me, I must learn how to face difficult moments in my life. I'
m
a father and a family, so I need to be an example for them. Regards, Murilo Siqueira
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • apologize
  • inconvenience
  • regret
  • unintentional
  • misunderstanding
  • own up
  • responsibility
  • remorse
  • commitment
  • ensure
  • attentive
  • clarification
  • improvement
  • genuine
  • impact
  • sincerely
  • acknowledge
  • positive sentiment
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