You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Writer a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers. offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear Mr Jone, I have just read an article from your journal which claims the similarities between our country's town centres with others around the world,
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, I don't totally agree and would like to expose my idea. Capitals around Brazil have to pass through a large renovation and must be explored by governments. In fact, the main towns in our country need to be renovated and explored by tourism
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, and mayors' investments with federal support should invest in healthy and security. As you know, most bad things happen during the night because we don't have enough illumination and it seems darkest than other neiborhood in the richest town.
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, travelling to other places abroad is possible to check investments in historical buildings to conquer more tourists. I'm pretty sure your newspaper has the influence to change the mind of our authorities and our wonderful cities could receive more investments, at least in infrastructure as well, so the future can be better than now. Regards, Bento Miguel
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