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in many countries, women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first month after the birth of their baby. Does advantage outweigh disadvantages?

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The pressure of a job is one of the biggest problems that many
women
 face. Especially the
women
 who give
birth
 to their
babies
.
Therefore
, in many countries, the government allows them to leave their
jobs
 during the
first
 month after the
birth
 of their
babies
 to take maternity leave. In my opinion, it brings lots of benefits for them but has some disadvantages. It is obvious that
women
 can have different
jobs
 in society.
This
 means that
women
 should take care of themselves when giving
birth
 to their children.
This
 means that
women
 should take care of themselves when giving
birth
 to their children. During the period they are preparing for
birth
, they need to check their bodies, and learn skills to look after
babies
, etc.
As a result
, their
jobs
 will become even more difficult than before. At
this
 time, learning their
jobs
 and staying at home is the best way to go. It can
also
 benefit the population when they take care of their
babies
.
Moreover
, leaving their
jobs
 has some disadvantages. Nowadays, the world is full of competition. All these people need to
work
 hard for their future. If they return to
work
 after their vacation, the companies may hire other people to replace them. Some
women
 cannot return to
work
 since they have to look after their
babies
' financial situation will decrease immediately. In conclusion, I believe that it has more advantages. Giving vacations to
women
 who will give
birth
 can let them focus on
birth
 and ensure they do not lose their salaries at
this
 time. Companies can find other people to
work
 with so that the companies will not lose money
also
.
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