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Some people think that school and government should take responsibility to transport children to school. While some people think that parents should get children to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #school #government #responsibility #transport #children #parents
Some people think that
school
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schools
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 should take
responsibility
 for
transport
Wrong verb form
transporting
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children
 to
school
. Other people believe that
parents
 only can transport
children
 to
school
.Who is right? In my
issue
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,issue
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i
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I
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 consider
this
Correct determiner usage
these
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 views and
gives
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give
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 my own opinion. In the
first
 version,
parents
wants
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want
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 to get guarantees that the
school
 takes
responsibility
 for their
children
.It is right. If buses drive from the
school
,
school
Add an article
the school
a school
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 should
take’s
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take
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responsibility
 for
children
Correct article usage
the children
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,which
siting
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sitting
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in
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on
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 the
bus
. But
school
Correct article usage
the school
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 should
takes
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take
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responsibility
 only when
Child
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the Child
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enter
Correct subject-verb agreement
enters
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 the
bus
 and finish takes when
child
Correct article usage
the child
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exit
Correct subject-verb agreement
exits
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 the
bus
.
School
 should not
takes
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take
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responsibility
 for the
children
,which
staying
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stay
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 in the
bus
 station or
going
Wrong verb form
go
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 to the magazine. In the
second
 version,
parents
 should get
children
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their children
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 to
the
Correct article usage
apply
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school
. I think it is incorrect
,
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apply
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 because
school
Fix the agreement mistake
schools
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 should help
parents
 to get
children
in
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into
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school
.
parents
 do not always have time to get their
children
 to
school
. In my opinion,
school
Add an article
the school
a school
show examples
 should
takes
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take
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responsibility
 for the
children
,which
siting
Correct your spelling
sitting
show examples
in
Change preposition
on
show examples
 the
school
bus
 and for the
children
 which located in the
school
 area
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