You work at home and have a problem with a piece of quipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work -say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir,
My name is Joy Kim. I am writing
this
letter to express my disappointment with the quality of the projector that I purchased last
week
on October 24th, 2022.
Last
week
, I had the opportunity to visit your store, and I decided to buy a black projector. It was working smoothly until yesterday when I wanted to double check
before attending the presentation Add a hyphen
double-check
next
week
, but when I pressed the power button, it just came up with a black screen without any pictures.
Next
week
, I will have a presentation. It is very important to me. Because it is my final text. I spent a lot of time preparing. I need a projector to assist me in displaying some information and video while I am speaking. It help
my speech Change the verb form
helps
Correct your spelling
easier
esier
for everyone to understand. Correct your spelling
easier
Furthermore
, it will help me get a high score on this
text
I would be grateful if you could come and check the equipment at my home, or replace it with new equipment
I look forward to hearing you soon. thank you
Yours faithfully,
Joy KimSubmitted by trieuminhh2000 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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