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Some people believe that museums should be enjoyable and entertaining to attract young people, while others think that museums should only serve educational purposes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some
people
 claim that
museums
 should be attractive to youngsters, while others argue that
museums
 are places to be employed for only educational aims. In my opinion, educational goals could be achieved while the entertaining aspects for visitors are considered. The entertaining atmosphere of
museums
 could improve a country's development by attracting young
people
. Young
people
 are an important part of each society. In today’s world, they are faced with different threats to the community and even themselves. By introducing an enjoyable space at
museums
 and defining some historical and cultural activities, youngsters could take part in
such
 activities as an active part of it. By participating in a variety of cultural activities, various groups with energetic young
people
 are formed and their outcome could play an important role in the country's cultural and artistic development.
For example
, in my
country
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 there are some
museums
 like the Saadabad museum complex which are equipped with cafes and cinemas with the same cultural and historical theme,
as a result
 of which many young
people
 are attracted to these centres. Others,
however
, argue that
museums
 should be only used as
an
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educational
tool
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. The value of educational aspects of
museums
 should be considered by their real fans only. When
museums
 are available only for educational aims, they are in less danger of being undervalued by unsophisticated visitors.
Also
,
the
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real lovers of
museums
 might donate some valuable objects to them for educational purposes in the future.
As a result
,
museums
 will be freshly available for long years with a variety of things from the past.
For example
, some
museums
’ management in the city of Shiraz, Iran, is delegated to the universities so that they can be used for purely educational purposes
such
 as educating passionate students who are majoring in related fields to arts and culture. In my opinion, educational aims could be more achievable while a creative and entertaining atmosphere in
museums
 is established. In
such
museums
, educational objects in form of art can be delivered to young
people
 who visit. To conclude, historical and cultural aspects of
museums
 could be presented in an enjoyable atmosphere while their educational aims are kept valuable for visitors.
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