you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion. write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers Offered to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regard to your article about the similarity of all city centres in Iran. any other part of my country.
First
of all, I should say I liked your article but I do not agree with your notion to some extent.
You have mentioned truly that all city centres in my country are rather bustling cities. ,Also
there are lots of apartments and towers in my country's metropolises like any other big city around the world. Moreover
, people get stuck in traffic jams.
However
, you have not considered that there is a significant difference in these cities' architectural heritage. For ,example there are lots of Ancient monuments in the Isfahan centre that are not availableChange preposition
in
Also
, Isfahan has the most original and untouched texture among other cities and is famous around the world for its buildings' special architectural characteristics.
Finally
, It would be my pleasure to be your host in my hometown so that you can pay a visit to its various places and spots. I can arrange a tour with a guild to accompany you in visiting Isfahan provided you are interested.
Sincerely yours,
RaziehSubmitted by m_sepahi on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite