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In the future nobody will buy printed news paper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

#future #nobody #news #paper #books
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 been important for so many people throughout the decades. The printed newspaper
which
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was
the
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purpose of it to stay updated about the previous economic, political and social news. In the current modern life, it can be better to read online which is offered in so many formal references, so
on
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 the
future
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 it is expected that so many will prefer to use more practical ways to know what happened around them. Reading online could completely save money
,
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 because the cost of online
books
 is more affordable than paper
books
.
Moreover
, it is easier to people to carry their knowledge in their pockets wherever they go . The reason
behind
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newspapers these days are not crucial as before,
because
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 the major sources, especially the virtual videos
which
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could be seen
by
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 social media and
others
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 references like television.
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, with the quick developments,
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the community
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community
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 are busy with huge tasks throughout their daily life, so not everyone has the convenient time to buy a new one from the stores every single day . The improvement includes many aspects.
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On
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 of them is the
changing
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 in information channels. To sum it up,
the
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society will give more attention to
the
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online
books
 and newspapers which are more convenient to
what
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the
world
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 direction .
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