In many countries crime rates among teenagers are higher than among other age groups. What are the causes of this problem and what can be done to solve it ?

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Nowadays, in many
countries
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crime
rates
between
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adolescents
are higher than among other age groups. In my
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i
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will describe, what are the reasons
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this
issue and what can be done to decide it. At the present
time
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there is an ongoing debate about why
youngsters
commit a
crime
more likely than older individuals. In my
view
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this
problem
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up because of bad family, as parents can educate their children and teenagers well. They show them the right way and they teach them to do good to people.
For instance
, if parents
raised
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well,
then
teenagers would not commit a
crime
.
Moreover
because of unemployment, bad friends and poverty,
youngsters
doing a
crime
and different steal. In my
opinion
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adolescents
must
brought
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up well and
to
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study well, have a broad-minded,
make
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friends with good people in order to in the future they have
a
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affordable destination, they were not unemployed and poor.
Besides
nowadays, many
youngsters
play different harmful games with friends and
thus
adolescents
start doing different harmful crimes.
However
, appropriate attention from elders and
adoption
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of well-being
counseling
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could help in the reduction of
this
. If teenagers get more time from their family members they will stay back at home, and there will be no need of compensating them. Modern technology is developing like life and
therefore
I think that older need to give
youngsters
different opportunities, need to give free education or do different activities so that
adolescents
are interested,
then
we can change
this
problem for the better.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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