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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The charts show information about the usage of
water
 in six different parts of the world for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes. Overall, what stands out from the graphs is that the largest use of
water
 in all six areas is for agriculture except North
America
 and
Europe
. Looking into the details, the least
water
 is used for domestic purposes in all six areas. The highest usage is in South
America
 and
Europe
 which is 19% and 15% respectively. North
America
 and Africa used 13% and 9%
water
 respectively for domestic consumption. While central
America
 and southeast
Asia
 used only 7%.
Similarly
, if we talk about the industrial usage of
water
then
Europe
 and North
America
 are at the top with 53% and 48% respectively. While south-east
Asia
 uses 12% and south
America
 uses 10%
water
 for industrial sectors. The least amount of
water
 is used in Africa and central
Asia
 is 7% and 5% respectively.
In contrast
, the largest share of
water
 is used for agricultural purposes in Central
Asia
 and Africa which is around 88% and 84% respectively. In southeast
Asia
, 81% and in South
America
, 71% of
water
 is used for irrigation. North
America
 uses only 39% of their
water
 for growing crops while 32% of
water
 is used by
Europe
 for agricultural land.
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