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Unemployment has become an increasing problem in the recent past What factors contribute to an increase in unemployment and what steps can be taken to solve the problem

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People always struggle to find a suitable job to provide all the facilities required to spend a healthy life. Many factors are creating problems for candidates to find a good job. In the coming paragraphs,
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 steps that we can take to solve the problem. We are living in a technologically revolutionized era, where many products are made by multiple companies; due to
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 they are in direct competition with each other to capture the market,
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 they try to save cost in many ways. One way is to work with less workforce which is creating unemployment in
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society.
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, robots and automatic machines are widely used that need less or no supervision and can work longer without any extra spending; not only these machines are
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 free of tiredness and other factors. Every problem can be solved if act wisely and timely, to solve the problem of unemployment authorities should draft policies that can force Insitute to hire minimum manpower to run the business;
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 government should waive some percentage of tax or provide other amnesties.
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, the government should force companies to balance the use of robots and humans in a way that helps to reduce unemployment.
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, there should be some policies that aid workers in more than one shift.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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