This
is undeniable that most
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countries
spend a lot of their revenue to improve
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and shape of
art
,
for
exampleAdd the comma(s)
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music and painting rather than improving
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condition of the country. From my perspective,
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policy makersCorrect your spelling
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should build up their priorities according to
nation'sCorrect article usage
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needFix the agreement mistake
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and
overallCorrect article usage
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development of the country. They should give more emphasis on public service.
First
and foremost, in most
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nations, one can find ,
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has invested
majorityAdd an article
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of
theirCorrect pronoun usage
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budget in
art
and craft.
for instance
, valuable
paintingFix the agreement mistake
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in streets and
, sculptures and expensive architects.
On the other hand
, these
countries
are witnessing
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overwhelming burden on
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care
systemFix the agreement mistake
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, poor road
conditionFix the agreement mistake
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,
devastatingCorrect word choice
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education
systemFix the agreement mistake
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. Leaders should regulate their budget
accordingly
and improve
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and education system.
However
, there are few developed
countries
which strengthen their
services
for
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public, like
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and UK.
Although
,
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and craft
is Change the verb form
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important, because
these Change the determiner
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heritage of the
nation
and express traditions and cultures,
but Correct word choice
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public
services
are more important than
art
.
Besides
, a
nation
can survive without
art
, while
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with outCorrect your spelling
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community
, it is quite impossible.
Therefore
, Government should build public
transportsFix the agreement mistake
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, improve road
, provide quality education, and spend money on community health. There are counties which
enrichedAdd a missing verb
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with culture and tradition but unable to improve their community ,
for
exampleAdd the comma(s)
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BrazilCorrect word choice
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.
, improvements
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general
services
will improve overall society holistically, and
a Remove the article
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civilized society can grow
.
To conclude, in my opinion,
governmentAdd an article
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should focus on
wholesomeAdd an article
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development of a
nation
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both, but they have to prioritize their need.
In other words
, whereas, developed
countries
can give emphasis on their
art
and culture, developing and underdeveloped
countryFix the agreement mistake
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should mainly focus on their public
services
.