Recently you have travelled by plane and during the journey you had an issue with one of airline employee. Write a letter to the company manager and say Give details of your flight Discuss the issue you have encountered What do you expect the nature to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you about an inconvenience that occurred to me during the travelled on your flight boing 777 on October 20th, 2022.

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, I want to file a complaint against your employees. I explained my whole situation

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letter. Since I am a diabetic patient and I requested your staff almost three times to serve me sugar-less foods but they forced me to eat regular dishes as other people were eating even though, I discussed my situation with them but they did not listen to my problems and declined my request. They had some alternatives option for sugarless food. I felt very disrespected because everyone was watching

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conversation.

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, I am requesting you to provide them with the proper training for your employee in a professional manner to avoid future problems so that your company don't lose its reputation among the customers and I won't apologise for the inconvenience that happens to me. I hope you understand my problem and take the necessary action on it. I will be waiting for your prompt reply. Your Faithfully,

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

186 words

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Recently you have travelled by plane and during the journey you had an issue with one of airline employee. Write a letter to the company manager and say Give details of your flight Discuss the issue you have encountered What do you expect the nature to do

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter: describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it, tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed. Others believe that zoos are necessary for education and conservation.

Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had huge negative effect on individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

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