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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

#people #situation #job #shortage #money #situations
Some people around us are not enthusiastic to change any bad situation. They have
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robust inertia and they are not receptive to any transformation.
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every thing
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 consistently. Here we will discuss
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.we will discuss
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 category,accept everything,they have complete
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acceptable employee for a static organization.
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staff would be calm and satisfied in
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 and would have no problem with rusty rules.They never
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also
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group
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observe the
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better performance.in ordinary
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although
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would be considered pessimistic.They would think about changing conditions to
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 consistently and try to reach
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the best.In organizations with
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 to keep
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benefits
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 many managers. In my
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both
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 provided that getting hired in
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 position, I prefer
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running society.But
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