Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: -suggest someone who deserves the reward -mention what they have done to help the community -say what reward you would like to give this person

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Hello Sir, I am Ozan, I am one of the members of your

community

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. I would like to determine my opinion about who deserves the reward. According to me, Mr John should win

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competition because he worked so hard the

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year to collect student scholarships.

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, he spent a lot of time finding a place for the students.

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, he is so generous to the students and he shared his all things with those who need help. In my opinion, he is eligible for

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profit. Actually, as much as I hear a lot of

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agree with my ideas. That's why I want to write to you about the nation's opinions. Please pay attention to our thoughts.

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, he is not a rich man he always helps students.

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, he has been working in

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as a volunteer for six years.

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, he is a very important person due to sustaining

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association. My name is Francis Peter. I read the news on your supplementary page, regarding the award for the

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support crowd. On

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occasion, I am suggesting our parish priest's name for it. His name is Fr. Chris Rob and currently he is the vicar

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St. Mary’s Cathedral Church, Melbourne. Fr. Chris is doing a lot of charity work for the parish association. For the

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2 years, he had done a fundraiser for helping poor

people

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in India. He collects the money from parish

people

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and church visitors. He made a charity clothing bin near the church and request

people

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donate some used clothes for the poor society. Once a year he visits India and stays with poor society. As a reward, if you give some valuable money,

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he would use that for the same charity support.

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, if you mention his signature in the newspaper regarding his

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work, would be a great appreciation for him.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

318 words

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