International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

Nowadays, as the world's prosperity grows, it is undeniable that international

tourism

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has a tremendous impact on our global economy.

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, there

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exists

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several negative aspects

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society that should not be overlooked.

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held that

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of overseas

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are more significant than

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benefits.

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essay partially agrees with the aforementioned statement and provides a set of

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to support each point of view before the conclusion is reached.

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and foremost, it is without a doubt that considerable financial gains

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the individual country

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from multinational tourists

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in Thailand where most of their national earnings stem from foreign

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.

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, local residents dwelling in tourist attractive areas can gain

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additional income through

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economic activity.

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,

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abroad contribute to the great relationship between countries as well as multicultural appreciation.

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, it is worth pointing out that there are

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arguments supporting the opinion that some negative consequences can derive from global

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.

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of all,

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action affects the well-being of the dwellers who may encounter numerous disturbances

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travelers

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. To be more explicit, many tourist activities bring about a range of noisiness and

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.

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of all, encouraging

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can deplete the earth's natural resources.

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,

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by

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can undermine the environment

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the occurrence of Carbon Dioxide

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in the atmosphere. To summarize, while international

tourism

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is significant to

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economic development and multinational association, various disadvantages come alongside namely

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issues, natural supply deprivations and

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environmental problems. I personally believe that to enhance the well-being of our society, if there is no harm to others and our nature, there is no doubt that

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course of action can be beneficial.