Not enough student around the world choose to study science subjects at the university. What are the reasons for this? What impact does this issue have on society? Give your reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Technology is rapidly changing the lives of people around the world, creating a high demand for
university
graduates
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in
science
.
However
, the number of students studying relevant subjects is well below the required level.
This
problem seems to
caused
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by outdated preconceptions, which determine young people’s choices today. One of those preconceptions is that certain subjects are better suited for men. Examples of these include mathematics, computer
science
, technologies and other fields of knowledge, which are totally dominated by males. In recent decades,
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noticeable progress has been achieved by many countries in acknowledging that men and women are equally capable in
science
. Despite
this
big step towards equality, female employees may still feel unwelcome or, in some instances, face evident discrimination in male-dominated work environments.
As a result
, many women with
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inclination to
science
settle on studying humanities or social
science
at the
university
, depriving society of their main talent. Another reason for the lack of
science
students spreads even wider. In the past, scientists were significantly paid less than professionals in prestigious areas,
such
as business and law.
Therefore
, ambitious young people tend to choose highly paid occupations, disregarding their aptitude for
science
. Things have changed today; today jobs in
science
are among those with the highest remuneration, but
this
trend is yet to reflect in the
university
application numbers.
For example
, in the UK, over half of all international students still come to study for a degree in business.
Consequently
, economies around the world are affected by an
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of social
science
graduates
and a deficit of
graduates
with technical skills. Not surprisingly, the complaints of fresh
graduates
who cannot find a job are frequent. To conclude, it seems some young people still perceive studying
science
as a route towards a mediocre income from a job where most of one’s colleagues are men.
Thus
, too many opt for
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in social sciences, creating an imbalanced society where highly-educated
university
graduates
struggle to find a skilled job.
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