Not enough student around the world choose to study science subjects at the university. What are the reasons for this? What impact does this issue have on society? Give your reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Technology is rapidly changing the lives of people around the world, creating a high demand for
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in
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.
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, the number of students studying relevant subjects is well below the required level.
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problem seems to
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by outdated preconceptions, which determine young people’s choices today. One of those preconceptions is that certain subjects are better suited for men. Examples of these include mathematics, computer
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, technologies and other fields of knowledge, which are totally dominated by males. In recent decades,
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noticeable progress has been achieved by many countries in acknowledging that men and women are equally capable in
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. Despite
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big step towards equality, female employees may still feel unwelcome or, in some instances, face evident discrimination in male-dominated work environments.
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, many women with
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inclination to
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settle on studying humanities or social
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at the
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, depriving society of their main talent. Another reason for the lack of
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students spreads even wider. In the past, scientists were significantly paid less than professionals in prestigious areas,
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as business and law.
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, ambitious young people tend to choose highly paid occupations, disregarding their aptitude for
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. Things have changed today; today jobs in
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are among those with the highest remuneration, but
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trend is yet to reflect in the
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application numbers.
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, in the UK, over half of all international students still come to study for a degree in business.
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, economies around the world are affected by an
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of social
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graduates
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and a deficit of
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with technical skills. Not surprisingly, the complaints of fresh
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who cannot find a job are frequent. To conclude, it seems some young people still perceive studying
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as a route towards a mediocre income from a job where most of one’s colleagues are men.
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, too many opt for
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a degree
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in social sciences, creating an imbalanced society where highly-educated
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graduates
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struggle to find a skilled job.
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