Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Transferring
money
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to friends, family and businesses
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become easier for
everyone
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by using current
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technologies
such
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as the
Internet
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or lack of
information
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. In my opinion,
although
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using
money
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transfers via
devices
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is sometimes difficult and dangerous for
everyone
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, there are
also
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many benefits.
To begin
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with, the harmful effects of using the
internet
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and smartphones during
money
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transfers.
This
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poses many potential risks and unsafety for
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.
For example
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, let many
people
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take advantage of
information
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devices
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to hack into your online banking card. they can be used to transact illegally even without the permission of the bank card holder. Or it may be because the owner himself entered the wrong number during the transaction, resulting in a loss of
money
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.
In addition
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, there are many bad links created by hackers to steal user
information
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. Most young
people
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can avoid it, except the elderly.
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, retired
people
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are becoming victims of identity theft by hackers sending them links or winning ads and old
people
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clicking innocently.
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, these cases do not happen often, in fact,
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are making
people
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's lives more convenient.
On the other hand
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, smart
devices
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and the
Internet
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have brought many benefits to
people
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. They save
everyone
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a lot of time.
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, In the old days, to be able to
transfer
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money
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to friends or family, you had to go to physical banks to do it.
This
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took a lot of time for getting in line and wrote complete
information
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. Today, with smart
devices
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in hand, users only need to manipulate a few steps to successfully complete transactions. What's more, it's convenient to transact
money
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via apps on smart
devices
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.
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, with just one app,
everyone
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can send
money
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to friends, family or businesses using different types of banks. To ensure safety, the
devices
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are integrated to check for errors in the
transfer
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process and they can check the transaction history whenever they want. In short,
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the
Internet
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and modern equipment, it has turned
people
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's
money
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transfer
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transfers
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from difficult to easy in just a few steps.
However
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,
everyone
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should
also
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pay attention and be careful during the
money
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transfer
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process.
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