Technolgy today such as mobile phones are destroying social interactions. Do you agree or disagree?

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With the improvement of technology

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as mobile phones, the internet, and applications, The world is becoming increasingly digital.

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say that it has a destructive impact on social interaction. I disagree with

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statement as I believe it just transforms it and has a positive effect on human communications. New technologies have broken down the communication barrier that distance once presented. You can contact anyone around the world immediately. With video calling apps like Skype and Zoom,

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can experience emotional connections without having to be in the same room.

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, during Corona Virus pandemic, which forces families to separate apart, it helps them to stay in touch.

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, other features,

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as sending messages allow

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the time to process information and send a proper response and avoid so much trouble. Technologies help

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with physical or mental issues.

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, it helps

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with social anxiety gain confidence by

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interaction over the internet

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of face-to-face. Or online dating apps make it easier to find love for introverted

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. And

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, disabled

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can forget physical boundaries inside a video game universe.

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, it helps so many

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who don't have typical characteristics in society means find similar ones faster and make their own communities. In conclusion, new technologies

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as mobile phones and digital applications have not lessened social interactions. They have positively changed the way of interaction and increased the good relationship among different individuals.

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Technolgy today such as mobile phones are destroying social interactions. Do you agree or disagree?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

most employers do job interview before offering a position to a person. do you think this is the best way to do it, or are there better alternatives? what is the best method of choosing employees in your opinion?

While travelling by metro train, your credit card slipped out of your pocket. You realized this only after reaching home. Write a letter to the concerned authorities and explain what happened.