Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?

Protecting
animals
is one of the most important problems
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many countries face.
However
, whether or not
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use
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the use
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animals
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of animals
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in testing new
drugs
or other products is a controversial issue. In my opinion, we should protect endangered wild
animals
and can
use
some disendangered
animals
to
test
new
drugs
. It is obvious that using
animals
to
test
new
drugs
is
necessary
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and very important
options
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. That means many
drugs
need to
be
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test
before it used
for
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by
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human
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humans
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. As
animals
have lots of parts of
body
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like
human
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humans
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, so that
use
animals
to
test
is
a
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best way. Scientists can get
report
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and data from the
test
and address the
drugs
. After testing,
people
believe that
drugs
is
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safety
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and can be used for all
the
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apply
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people
.
For example
, during covid-19
throughout
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all over the world, scientist
use
write
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mouse
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mice
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and rebits to
test
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vaccines
vacines
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vaccines
, after
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the test
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test
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, all
the
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people
can
use
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vaccine
vacine
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vaccine
to protect covid.
Therefore
,
animals
is
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are
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very useful for human, especially for
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the research
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of new
drugs
.
Otherwise
, some
people
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think
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thing
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think
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that using
animals
to
test
new
drugs
is very terrible for
animals
. That means during testing,
animals
will
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feel
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fell
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feel
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painful
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since scientists
use
incorrect items. And scientists will change the items and adjust the
drugs
when they get the data
of
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from
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testing. At the same time, the
animals
maybe
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died because of
painful
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or over
drug
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drugs
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.
Moreover
, some products
such
as clothing
also
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made from
fur
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of
animals
. It
cause
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some kind of
animals
close to distinct by hunting. In conclusion, nowadays,
although
we cannot avoid using
animals
to
test
new
drugs
,
but
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we can try our best to reduce the pain for
animals
.
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animals
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life is
positive
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a positive
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thing for us.
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