In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

Nowadays, as the world's prosperity grows, there is a continuously increasing trend in the rate of those travelling by

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their

thier

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their

own vehicles.

However

,

this

action contributes to numerous

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many aspects and chief among others is congested and hectic traffic which is being encountered by many

overcrownded

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overcrowded

countries.

Hence

, there has been an ongoing dispute concerning the benefits and drawbacks of rising enormous

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to

people

owing private

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in order to enhance public

transports

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.

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essay discusses both aspects of the aforementioned issue with various reasons to support each point of view before the conclusion is reached.

First

and foremost, it is undeniable that increasing additional tax can effectively reduce the number of cars on the road and solve the problem of significant congestion.

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is due to the fact that

this

measure will force residents dwelling in society to gradually decrease their usage of

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car

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in order for money to be saved.

Moreover

, allocating financial gain from

this

operation to encourage dwellers

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public

transportion

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transportation

can

also

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well-being of them as they can effortlessly and affordably commute to work without purchasing

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car.

On the contrary

, there exist a number of negative consequences

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from

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method.

People

living in

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area

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can not approach these benefits equally as

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public

tranports

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transports

transport

are not accessible in some regions.

As a result

, they have to buy their own cars. If government declare

this

policy, many locals will encounter financial issues.

Furthermore

,

this

policy inevitably undermines an individual's freedom. To justify

this

notion,

people

from all walks of life must have the right to choose their lifestyle's choice whether they want to commute by their own cars or the public's. To summarize, despite the fact that the problem of congestion can be efficiently handled by taxing vehicle owners, there are several inevitable

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disadvantages

disadvantage

disadvatages

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disadvantages

namely financial problems of

people

residing in far-flung areas or restriction of freedom. In my perspective,

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should apply sustainable solutions in the long run and affect their citizens

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a minor scale.