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Some people think that uniform is a good idea for a company. To what extent do you agree or disgree?

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Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about more and more companies
asked
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 their
staffs
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staff
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 to wear
uniform
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uniforms
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 at
work place
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workplace
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.
However
, whether it is
a
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good thinking for employees to wear
same
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the same
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 working
clothes
 is a controversial issue. My view is that it is good for
company
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the company
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 to let their
staffs
 wear
same
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the same
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 design of
clothes
 at
work place
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workplace
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.
First
, it is obvious that
uniform
 is good for companies to improve their band. A good design
of
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uniform
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the uniform
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 can catch customers’ eyes and give a good
first
 impression to customers. So
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the customer
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customer
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customers
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 will have more
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confidence
confidents
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confidence
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 to choose the service or products from
this
company
.
Moreover
, it is easier for
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people
poeople
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people
 to look for
a
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customer service when all
staffs
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staff
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 are wearing
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a uniform
the uniform
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uniform
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uniforms
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.
For example
, a person who
want
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 to buy a new phone from
apple
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the apple
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 store, once he went into the shop,
he
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apply
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will know
who
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 he should ask for a service as soon as possible.
Therefore
, customers will have a good shopping experience at the beginning.
That
is not say
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 that
uniform
 does not have any disadvantages. Of course, some
staffs
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staff
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 do not like to wear
working
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clothes
,
this
 is because they think the
uniform
 is not as comfortable as their own
clothes
. But not everyone has the same feeling. In summary, every
company
 should have their own
uniform
 due to improve
their
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its
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 band power or provide a better customer
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service
series
circle
sercie
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service
. Meanwhile, some of
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the staffs
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staffs
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staff
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 may not like to wear a
uniform
 because it is
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uncomfortable
unconformtable
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uncomfortable
. By doing so we can make sure that
company
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the company
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 can provide their
employees
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employee's
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good
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with good
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 design and quality
working
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work
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clothes
.
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