Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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need to be able to find their interests and spend

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on their own to perfect their skills, while others argue that

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would benefit more from having good quality

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outings and events arranged for them by adults or their

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. I personally believe that

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activities should be encouraged by

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because it would help to overcome some fears

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as social awkwardness. On the one hand, people believe that adolescents need to spend

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on their own to learn to cope with their thoughts and find their true interests.

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is not always beneficial and could cause detrimental effects on teenagers' psychological

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, I believe that there is a high possibility of

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wasting their

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on video games or surfing on the internet and social media

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of learning something useful.

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, recent research on the growth of

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's minds showed that

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that spend more

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at home alone, are more prone to have complexes and issues

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as social awkwardness. As a real example, I can certainly say that I would probably benefit more if I would have more social interaction with other

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when I was younger, because my current shyness, I assume, is mostly caused by the lack of that social experience.

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, there are groups of people who strongly believe that

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activities for

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should be welcomed by their

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because

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could learn much more and have positive experiences during those events.

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to say, I believe that

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who spend a lot of

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socially active would never have issues speaking in public or making new friends or talking to a stranger without any shyness and discomfort. Apart from that,

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would learn and share much more knowledge and information while they are together in the outings and

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activities.

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, in the same research that was mentioned ,earlier researchers monitored and compared the behaviour of

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from both categories and found that socially active

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are happier and less stressed. In conclusion,

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there might be people who believe that

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need to spend

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on their own to learn and occupy themselves,

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, I strongly believe that young minds would benefit from social

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gatherings much more and that it should be welcomed by their

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