More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Cities
offer greater employment possibilities and a higher standard of living.
However
, people are moving from rural
area
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areas
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to urban
area
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for living
better
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a better
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lifestyle
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lifestyles
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.
Moreover
, living
life
in a city might be quite
challenges
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.
Traffic
and
expensive
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cost
of living is the major
challenges
. Governments should improve public transportation and construct residential
area
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for
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reduce
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reducing
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cost
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the cost
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of living. I will elaborate more in
next
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the next
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two
paragraph
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.
To begin
with,
traffic
congestion is one of the major problem
face
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in
urban
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an urban
the urban
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area
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. Many people faced
this
problem in their daily work
life
when they come
to
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home
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the home
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.
As a result
of
this
, many workers arrived at their workplace late and accident may happen. There for,
government
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the government
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should step up and improve public transport like
metro
train
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trains
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or local bus services so that more people can utilize
this
facility and
avoided
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traffic
congestion on road.
For instance
, recently in
metro
cities
governments
was introduce
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metro
train
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trains
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for transportation. It was observed that
,
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after the introduction of
metro
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train
employees left their
car
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at home and ride the
metro
train
.
Furthermore
, the
second
challenges
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challenge
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for
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living urban city of the
cost
of living. Due to
increase
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of
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in
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population because of
migration
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the migration
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public, they face
shortage
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a shortage
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of resident
area
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areas
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.
As a result
, in urban
cities
housing is usually much more expensive.
For example
, in
metro
cities
like
Mumbai
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it is observed the
cost
of
two-bedroom
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hall kitchen flat is too
much
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high so that not
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anyone
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any one
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anyone
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can effort to
buy
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itbuy
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.
Also
, the rent of
apartment
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as well as
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, as well as flat,
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flat
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a flat
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is more expensive. In conclusion, due to high
traffic
congestion and expensive housing
rates
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,rates
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the
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life
in
cities
is more difficult. Government should work on these two major
challenges
to make urban
life
not stressful.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Metropolis
  • Rapid urban growth
  • Megacity
  • Urban sprawl
  • Housing affordability
  • Infrastructure development
  • Public transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Pollution
  • Noise pollution
  • Green spaces
  • Job market
  • Social cohesion
  • Community engagement
  • Safety measures
  • Crime prevention
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