More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Cities
offer greater employment possibilities and a higher standard of living. However
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better
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a better
lifestyle
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lifestyles
Moreover
, living life
in a city might be quite challenges
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challenging
Traffic
and expensive
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the expensive
cost
of living is the major challenges
. Governments should improve public transportation and construct residential area
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for
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to
reduce
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reducing
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next
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the next
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paragraphs
To begin
with, traffic
congestion is one of the major problem face
in Replace the word
faced
urban
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an urban
the urban
area
. Many people faced Fix the agreement mistake
areas
this
problem in their daily work life
when they come to
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apply
home
. Add an article
the home
As a result
of this
, many workers arrived at their workplace late and accident may happen. There for, government
should step up and improve public transport like Add an article
the government
metro
train
or local bus services so that more people can utilize Fix the agreement mistake
trains
this
facility and avoided
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avoid
traffic
congestion on road. For instance
, recently in metro
cities
governments was introduce
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introduced
metro
train
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trains
,
after the introduction of Remove the comma
apply
metro
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the metro
train
employees left their car
at home and ride the Fix the agreement mistake
cars
metro
train
.
Furthermore
, the second
challenges
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challenge
for
living urban city of the Change preposition
of
cost
of living. Due to increase
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the increase
of
population because of Change preposition
in
migration
public, they face Correct article usage
the migration
shortage
of resident Add an article
a shortage
area
. Fix the agreement mistake
areas
As a result
, in urban cities
housing is usually much more expensive. For example
, in metro
cities
like Mumbai
it is observed the Add a comma
,Mumbai
cost
of two-bedroom
hall kitchen flat is too Correct article usage
a two-bedroom
much
high so that not Correct quantifier usage
apply
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anyone
any one
can effort to Correct your spelling
anyone
buy
. Correct pronoun usage
itbuy
Also
, the rent of apartment
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an apartment
as well as
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, as well as flat,
flat
is more expensive.
In conclusion, due to high Correct article usage
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traffic
congestion and expensive housing rates
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,rates
the
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life
in cities
is more difficult. Government should work on these two major challenges
to make urban life
not stressful.Submitted by jaymin.gajjar.86 on
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