You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do Write at least 150 words.

#work #home #piece #equipment #job #shop #company

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter in order to register a complaint about the Wi-Fi router which I bought from your shop

last

month. I am a regular customer of your shop and have never faced

such

issues. Due to working from home, I require to use a laptop and mobile phone at the same time to attend the confocal with my team. When I connect to my phone it won't work on a laptop so, I am not able to connect internet on multiple devices at the same time.

Last

week I contacted the internet service provider company to confirm if there is an issue with their network connection but, their technician confirmed that there is no issue with that by checking with other models. Because of

this

problem, I couldn't able to connect to meet with clients and had to face a difficult situation. It was embarrassing to explain

this

to my manager. As you can see my career is at stake perhaps the ideal solution is to provide me with free of cost replacement immediately as well as I am expecting monetary compensation because it is under warranty. I am attaching an invoice copy and warranty card for your reference purpose. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon and hope that matter will be resolved quickly. Yours faithfully, Prajakta Udhav

Submitted by ppudhav.3 on Tue Nov 01 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

227 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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