Some people think that the news media nowadays have influenced people's lives in negative ways.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

By the 21st century,
information
technologies began to develop. Many
people
argue
that
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has a negative effect on
people
. But I disagree. I believe that
news
media big role in our
life
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today. I will consider them in
this
essay. On the one hand, it is very good for us, because we are aware of what is happening in the world.
For example
, if there is an illness,
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murder or theft, these messages are immediately sent to the groups and we are informed.
In addition
, we are immediately informed about natural disasters
such
as earthquakes, volcanoes, floods and
fogs
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. It will not be a lie if I say that three years ago, the plague of the 21st century,  Covid-19, scared everyone. at
this
time, we were aware of how many
people
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in which country through
information
technology.
On the other hand
, it
also
has a downside.Fake
news
spreads fast. It makes
people
very nervous and psychologically disturbed. Many
people
sometimes believe these messages.
This
is not true.
In addition
,cases of deceiving
people
and taking their money were
also
observed.
For instance
, they took money from my brother's card. There are various games and sites on phones that trick
people
and take their money.
Furthermore
,
information
technology is good for us to get
information
about everything. But we must be careful of false
news
.
Moreover
, I think ,should not believe every
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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