Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both side and give your opinion.

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some individuals that finishing

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university

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and getting a degree

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an effective method of securing

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employment, while others consider the acquisition of practical

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and experience as more essential. In my opinion, I think the completion of

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education is vital for getting a job because it gives the applicant an edge over others and

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their mental capacity. On the one hand and in my opinion,

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education makes

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preferred to other candidates.

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, the certificate given to graduates on the completion of their education is

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universally acceptable evidence of what the holder is able to do.

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makes it easier for employers to validate their abilities.

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, the

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curriculum has been designed to be broad, covering all aspects.

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characteristic of the

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improves the intelligence and mental ability of anyone that passes through the system.

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, most employment tests have

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graduates scoring highest when compared to their contemporaries without a degree.

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, acquiring practical experience is

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considered vital because it gives people practical

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I mean, some technical jobs require more practical

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than theory.

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, a plumber will improve

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hands-on practice than what he may be thought in

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class. In conclusion, I believe getting a degree from

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is more essential for securing

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employment than practical

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because it makes them more suitable and improves their intellectual capacity.