A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime. Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighbourhood. In your letter: - Recommend that your friend not go ahead with the purchase - Give the reasons behind your decision to leave - Suggest possible alternative areas that you know

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Dear Javid, I am writing to let you know that I am about to abandon my accommodation because of a certain reason.There is a high crime rate in my neighbourhood. I would like to give some advice you with regard to your housing plan.Please,do not hurry to buy a house near my residence.It would be dangerous for you and your family only if you move here owing to an increase in burglary and violence. As the above-mentioned,I have fear of being a victim of crime
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I have decided to leave my present location.
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,it is difficult to raise a child here because there are a lot of people who are obsessed with narcotics and alcohol. With the exception of
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residence,there are numerous quiet places that are situated in the city centre.You can find houses that are at reasonable prices and within walking distance of facilities like hospitals, schools and shopping centres.One of the suitable accommodations is located near the Allianz Arena. Hope to see you soon Sincerely Malik Maliki.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reconsider
  • unfortunate
  • incidents
  • safety concerns
  • deteriorating
  • neighborhood
  • increase in crime
  • personal experience
  • unsafe environment
  • alternatives
  • lower crime rates
  • amenities
  • community-oriented
  • recommend
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