During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter • Remind him when and where you met • Tell him what kind of job you are interested in • Say why you think you would be suitable for the job.

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Dear Mrs Jean I am writing

this

letter regarding a possible in one of your restaurants as you suggested during a recent plane journey.

To begin

with, I am Sandar who sat

to you on a plane journey

last

week. I hope that you will recognise me. We had great conservation throughout the journey and I could get not only a lot of knowledge but

also

valuable advice. To be frank, I am interested in working as a cleaner or waiter in your restaurant. I will be happier if you can offer me a Chief assistant.

Moreover

, I am currently attending some cookery courses as a part-time student.

Therefore

, I am able to assist Chiefs when they need help in the kitchen as I have a basic knowledge of how to use the kitchen appliance.

In addition

, I am able to work at the weekend or on public holidays. If you are looking for an entry worker with basic knowledge, I can assert that I will be the best worker to support you by hard-working. Thanks in advance for your kind consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely yours Sandar

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7 paragraphs

194 words

9.00

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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