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The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie charts break down information about the
world
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's forests and
timber
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 by continent. Looking at the
world
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 as a whole,
it is clear that
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Africa
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 and North
America
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 have the most woodlands, followed by Europe, South
America
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, and Asia.
Africa
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,
on the other hand
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, has the least amount of
timber
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,
while
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 North
America
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 has the most. Looking first at North
America
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 and
Africa
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, the former continent accounts for 25% of the
world
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's forest,
while
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 the latter accounts for 27%. In terms of
timber
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, North
America
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 has a slightly higher figure (30
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percent
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per cent
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) and
Africa
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 has a much lower figure (9
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percent
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per cent
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). In the other regions, the forest and
timber
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 ratios are more balanced. European countries account for 18% of the
world
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's forests and 20% of its
timber
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. South
America
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 has a marginally lower forest share of 16
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percent
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per cent
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 and a moderately greater wood share of 23
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percent
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per cent
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.
Therefore
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, Asian forests account for 14% of the global total and 18% of all
timber
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, timber, africa, america, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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