Some schools require their students to wear uniforms because they believe it helps the students focus on their schoolwork rather than on their clothes. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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are important for the development of many

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helped there has

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on their activities. My opinion is that wearing a uniform contributes for learned

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avoids bullying between them, helped generates a sense of equality and assists in the safety and

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of the

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, some

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and adolescents like to use clothes of brands for exhibition for others with intention of fitting in.

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makes other

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comparate and is harmful to their psychological and ,in some cases ,taking bullying

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their vestments.

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, the use of

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generates a sense of equality and assists in the safety,

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, is util in the

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of the

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the school as on the bus, on the trains, and between other. The use of uniform help the own school in the

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and avoid different people enter at the school. In conclusion, I believe that distinct schools force the

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of

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feeling in the learning of the

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, wearing

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is very important for the focus, and

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of the

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assists equality between them.