Some schools require their students to wear uniforms because they believe it helps the students focus on their schoolwork rather than on their clothes. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Different schools believe that wearing

uniforms

are important for the development of many

students

helped there has

focus

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on their activities. My opinion is that wearing a uniform contributes for learned

students

,

also

avoids bullying between them, helped generates a sense of equality and assists in the safety and

indication

of the

students

.

Secondly

, some

students

and adolescents like to use clothes of brands for exhibition for others with intention of fitting in.

This

makes other

students

comparate and is harmful to their psychological and ,in some cases ,taking bullying

because

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their vestments.

Thirdly

, the use of

uniforms

generates a sense of equality and assists in the safety,

furthermore

, is util in the

indication

of the

students

as

then

the school as on the bus, on the trains, and between other. The use of uniform help the own school in the

indication

of the

students

,

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and avoid different people enter at the school. In conclusion, I believe that distinct schools force the

wear

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of

uniforms

feeling in the learning of the

students

,

nonetheless

, wearing

uniforms

is very important for the focus, and

indication

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an indication

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of the

students

and

also

assists equality between them.