You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend.

Dear summit, Congratulations!! I'm very thrilled to know about your
graduation
ceremony held
last
week 1st
job
in your letter you mentioned You are confused between starting a
job
or going for
further
studies I would definitely suggest you
to
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apply
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start a new
job
because
your
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of your
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graduation
because after your
graduation
it's time to apply theoretical knowledge in the practical world. As you know most of your friends will start a new
job
and earn money so I think you will not enjoy studying that much
further
if you want to do your master's you can go Go for it later After saving some money meanwhile as your father just retired from his
job
you will have to support your family financially.
Furthermore
, I came to know about the campus placement going to be held
next
month so you should participate in it as you are very fond of developing new technology and you just completed greit's completed
graduation
in IT engineering I would suggest you
to
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apply for an interview for a Web development profile in space X. Hope for the best your new poho for the best for your new beginning. Your friend Rahul
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Juncture
  • Firsthand
  • Practical skills
  • Theoretical focus
  • Financial independence
  • Career advancement
  • Real-world experience
  • Part-time studies
  • Online courses
  • Financial stability
  • Career goals
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