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Some people believe that it is the residents that are responsible for the cleaning and tidying the street. While others believe it is the responsibility of the government. Discuss both sides and give your opinions

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Owing to the problem
on
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 who should responsible
in
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for
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 tidying the
street
, while some people argue that it is the
government
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government's
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 job, others believe that it is the resident's responsibility. In my opinion, there should be a
sharing
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 task between the
government
 and the residents to do the job. The
government
 has an obligation by the law to provide a good place for its people to live, including a clean
street
.
Moreover
,
street
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the street
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area
 is a public space that should be taken care
by
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 the official. The local authority has a big
budget
, making
a
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street
 cleaning
is
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an easy task to do.
For example
, in 2018, the annual local
budget
 for public
area
 maintenance was about 2 billion
rupiah
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.
This
 amount is seen as a stellar
budget
 for just keeping the public
area
 tidy, making the tidying
is
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an easy and feasible task for the
government
.
Thus
, the
government
 should take
the
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responsibility
of
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for
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road
 maintenance given its big
budget
.
On the other hand
, the residents
also
 have the obligation to take care of the
road
 near their
house
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houses
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 as it is part of their
area
. People who live by the
road
has
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have
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 a big influence
to
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on
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 the cleanliness of their nearby
street
. The leaves from the trees at their property might fall into the
street
, making the
road
 dirty.
For instance
, in the fall season in the Beverly Hills
area
, a small
road
 might be closed because it is blocked by
the
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tons of leaves from the trees inside the residents' houses.
In other words
, even
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though
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tough
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though
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 the
street
 is a common
area
, the property nearby could influence the tidiness of the
street
. In conclusion,
although
 a
street
 is a public
area
where
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that
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 normally
become
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becomes
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 the
government
's obligation to take care of it, the public
also
 should be part of the move.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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