The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagrams illustrate the changes that are proposed to take place

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the Norbiton industrial area. From an

overall

perspective, the area

that is

now filled with factories is planned to get converted into a

residensial

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residential

area. From the central roundabout, a new

road

which runs northwards, crossing the river is to be construed.

This

road

leads to a new housing unit constructed on the uninhabited farmland. Another new

road

runs northwest from the roundabout leading to 2 housing units and a shop. The

road

that runs south of the roundabout leads to another novel roundabout. Taking a look at the eastern part of the town, starting from the roundabout, a medical

center

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, playground and school are to be construed. The factories that flanked the eastern

road

are to be replaced by more housing units.

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industrial area
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