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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagrams illustrate the changes that are proposed to take place
to
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in
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 the Norbiton industrial area. From an
overall
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 perspective, the area
that is
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 now filled with factories is planned to get converted into a
residensial
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residential
 area. From the central roundabout, a new
road
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 which runs northwards, crossing the river is to be construed.
This
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road
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 leads to a new housing unit constructed on the uninhabited farmland. Another new
road
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 runs northwest from the roundabout leading to 2 housing units and a shop. The
road
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 that runs south of the roundabout leads to another novel roundabout. Taking a look at the eastern part of the town, starting from the roundabout, a medical
center
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, playground and school are to be construed. The factories that flanked the eastern
road
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 are to be replaced by more housing units.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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