The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagrams illustrate the changes that are proposed to take place

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the Norbiton industrial area. From an

overall

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perspective, the area

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now filled with factories is planned to get converted into a

residensial

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residential

area. From the central roundabout, a new

road

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which runs northwards, crossing the river is to be construed.

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road

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leads to a new housing unit constructed on the uninhabited farmland. Another new

road

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runs northwest from the roundabout leading to 2 housing units and a shop. The

road

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that runs south of the roundabout leads to another novel roundabout. Taking a look at the eastern part of the town, starting from the roundabout, a medical

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, playground and school are to be construed. The factories that flanked the eastern

road

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are to be replaced by more housing units.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

136 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
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