As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There has been a contentious topic about the fact that

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, apart from making a good

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,

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have to be responsible for the well-being of society. In my opinion, I strongly agree with

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statement due to the fact that the lack of responsibility of firms and cooperations can have a

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detrimental

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detrimental

effect on the

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as well as the salary of their

workers

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and foremost, the outcome of

businesses

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only focusing on maximizing their

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can have a negative effect on the

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. Researchers from

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Havard University have found out that the waste created by factories, is one ò the main reasons for the alarming

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environment

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situation that the world

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facing right now.

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, it is pivotal that

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, contribute their effort to protect the

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.

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can be done by reducing

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industrial waste as well as producing products that, are friendly to the

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,

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of all, in the process of

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their

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, firms will try to cut down on their expenses, leading to

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decrease in the income of

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matter is the fact that

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a lot of international cooperations

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China as their manufacturer thanks to the cheap labour cost.

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,

workers

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are paid a minimum wage, which is just barely enough to pay for their cost of living.

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,

businesses

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should

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consider not just the

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but

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the status of their

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. In conclusion, as well as making money,

businesses

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should take responsibility

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ensuring the well-being of

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society.

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can be done by protecting the

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, as well as higher wages for their

workers

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.