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Today's school should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is now a commonly understood perspective that one inevitably needs to be able to maintain their financial condition in
order
 to survive living in
today
's society, and I agree that the idea should be
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teaching
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 at school. Transferring
this
 kind of knowledge, especially to younger generations from
their
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 early age, is important to some extent. The earlier they are aware that finance is
inseparable
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 aspect to be considered in
order
 to live and survive, the sooner and easier it will be for them to prepare and navigate their future. It is important for students to know the reason behind the importance of
money
 and understand why it is being used
as
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today
's currency trade. As they slowly come to understand both theories, they will soon realize the value of
money
 and its contribution to one's financial condition in
today
's society.
Furthermore
, the education system can provide
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 about what to do and not
to
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do to obtain, maintain, and increases their
money
 in
order
 to survive.
On the other hand
, teaching it from an early age at school will
further
 lead to two
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possibilities
possibilites
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possibilities
, whether it will create a generation with much consideration to gain and spend
money
 or one with
a more materialistic, selfish, and greedy traits
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on
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 younger generations in
order
 to richen themselves. The latter is indeed dangerous and will create chaos and broaden the gap between the lower and higher class or
economy
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 status. In conclusion, it is agreeable that the education system should teach the students
of
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how to be able to survive financially in
today
's society
,
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 but needs to pay attention as to how they should deliver the idea in
order
 to not create future chaos and greedy generations.
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  • practical financial skills
  • budgeting
  • saving
  • investing
  • income inequality
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  • traditional education
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