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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #teenagers #community #work #time #benefit
Youngsters are considered as the life of
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generation
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. It is considered
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some part of society that the youth should involve in social
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 during their leisure time which in turn aid the well-being of both teens and society. I strongly agree with
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To begin
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their
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 young age which will heavily influence
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their character development.
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such
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during their young age , which they would continue these characteristics throughout their life.
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, students involved in groups like RED CROSS & NCC
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 level are leading
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 disciplined life and
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 engaged in public well-being activities.
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, the teenagers would get more opportunity to know about various levels of people in the community and they can help to uplift the people who are living in
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 which in turn build
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 sense of compassion and equality among the public . So parents must involve children in
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 of responsibility
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 young age. Government can
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school
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 level to make them aware
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 importance of getting
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 public forums. To recapitulate, the involvement of peer
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 in social welfare without expecting rewards would benefit not only society but
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 to themselves. It would aid
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 development of their character
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 so that they become more compassionate and responsible in future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • required
  • unpaid
  • community work
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • life skills
  • volunteering
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • socially aware
  • responsible
  • interact
  • diverse backgrounds
  • cultural understanding
  • tolerance
  • work experience
  • essential skills
  • employment
  • interests
  • passions
  • career development
  • contribute
  • betterment
  • development
  • local community
  • mental well-being
  • stress
  • self-esteem
  • burden
  • academic
  • personal lives
  • time management
  • support
  • balance
  • participate
  • encouraged
  • numerous benefits
  • individuals
  • conclusion
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