Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

For over many years

art

was seen as

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best thing to do in life all over the world.

However

, in today’s era with the changing environment,

people

have now put their focus on technology and

business

.

This

essay will highlight the causes and some of the actions that can be done so that

people

see the importance of

arts

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. Outlined below are some reasons why

people

have changed their focus from

arts

to technology and

business

.

Firstly

, since we are living in an environment which is not static,

people

now want to move along which the changes happening in the world.

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instance

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the introduction of machines at workplaces has made

people

to

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have skills in computers so that they have knowledge in operating

such

machines. The other reason is that

art

is now viewed as a none viable

business

in other parts of the world.

For example

in Zimbabwe, where

people

sell

sculptors

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to tourists, because of bad publicity on the international trade very few tourists are now visiting the country

as a result

that has made

people

to

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look into other industries like IT and

business

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field. As a way of shifting the human mind so that it realizes the importance of

art

, there are a number of tactics that could be employed. The following approaches can be taken: the government can build

art

centres which could be galleries, theatres and music studios

to

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those who have an

art

gift of singing.

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example

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in South

Africa

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they have a special music genre they like called Amapiano and they give free recording time to singers who can make that musical beat. The other approach would be to make

art

a compulsory subject at schools and

also

teaching

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school children about great artists like Michelangelo who are famous

about

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their

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art works

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in that way students may be inspired to follow

such

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footsteps. In conclusion,

people

should not entirely through away the

arts

and primarily focus on

business

and technology. They should

also

reconsider the

art

sector because it is in

this

sector we

also

get good singers and the

arts

is

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also

seen as a way of protecting our cultural values and heritage.