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LETTER OF APOLOGY Topic 3: You made a mistake in classroom. Write a letter to your teacher. In the letter: State your apology Describe the situation Write about your promise to change. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear
Mr.
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 Jeed, I am writing to apologize that I made
a
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misbehaviour
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the
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class
last
 Monday, and I hope you can forgive me. I cordially have an apology
about
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a
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 faulty conduct, and I would
like
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 correct my mistakes by accepting any punishment that you require me to do.
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, I would like to implement some volunteer tasks to assist our class to become better,
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cleanness
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 that day , I
had
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consistent
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 interrupted your lecture during a historical class and made
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 inappropriate
racism
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 joke in front of
classmates
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, after talking with you, I realized that I should respect each ethnicity in our classroom , rather than
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 fun of it. I will write a public letter to
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apologize
aplogize
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apologise
 for my terrible mistaken behaviour and inquire other students whether they would like to accept my apology.
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Moreover
Morerover
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, I am willing to help you to do some essential classroom tasks so as to facilitate the state of happiness
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 pupils. I look forward to hearing your reply regarding my suggestions and I hope you will accept my
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 apology. Yours Sincerely Claire Chen
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sincerest apologies
  • responsible for
  • acknowledgment
  • integrity
  • introspect
  • disruption
  • self-awareness
  • repercussions
  • concrete steps
  • amends
  • adhering to
  • commitment
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