Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I totally agree that wealthy

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should accept more

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and provide them with basic needs,

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as accommodation and meals. In

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essay, I will discuss both views and try to draw some conclusions.

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wealthy

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should take social responsibility

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because they have much bigger resources, money and opportunity compared to other poorer

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.

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,

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will live in better conditions and won’t illegally enter

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some

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, breaking the border law.

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poor lands will lose additional responsibility.

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, when Saudi Arabia started accepting

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from Iran, Iranians and

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poor

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that used to accept those people were very grateful to Saudi Arabia’s government. Another reason why I agree with

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of

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by rich

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is that

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of those

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will increase, which can be

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significant outlook

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country

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, nowadays many Russians are abandoning their motherland and going to Turkey because of sanctions and mobilization in

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the Russian

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Federation.

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, Turkey’s reputation and even tourism

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rising among many

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and Russians around the world.

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, there is an argument that

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can do some outlaw actions,

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as robbery since they don’t they are financially unstable or even poor, which is proved by a study.

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, citizens of

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will suffer

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foreigners, and they are likely to hate them. To draw a conclusion, I want to say that there are both pluses and minuses of

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topic and issue. Personally, I think that wealthy

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should accept

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and provide not only housing and food

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but

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some workplaces from where they could get some salary.