Some people like to own place where they live, bot other people like to rent where they live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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some
people
think they have to buy an Correct your spelling
accommodation
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for themselves, Correct your spelling
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though
thought
thoght
, some of them deny Correct your spelling
though
and
believed that they should rent it, in my view, Correct pronoun usage
it and
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due
duo
to fragile economical issues in countries, that's better to buy a home and be Correct your spelling
due
owner
and don't pay rent to others and real estates monthly and annually etc.
Living in a Add an article
the owner
an owner
place
that is
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, calm and there is no any Correct your spelling
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concerned
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an individual
the individual
individual
to buy properties. Experiments in recent decades Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
shows
that Change the verb form
show
people
who are the owner are more happy, on one hand in some countries it's not hard to buy a place
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, on
the Change preposition
despite
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other
others
domestic structure in government don't let Add a comma
,others
people
to
own a Change the verb form
apply
place
easily.
High quality of living is merely depends
on every Change the verb form
merely depends
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single
signle
person, some Correct your spelling
single
people
believed that it's better to pay for their comfort, buy whatever the
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leisure
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activities
activites
they like. An extensive experiment shows that Correct your spelling
activities
these kind
of Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
people
has more easy-going personality and they care about their goof
feeling than pay attention to their Correct your spelling
good
lives
concerns. Change the noun form
life
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example
if a person Add a comma
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pay
a lot to buy a property and pay the bills and loans, Change the verb form
pays
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prefer
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that money to improve the quality of living or Correct your spelling
spend
investing
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invest
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their jobs or Change preposition
in
some
stocks.
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apply
buy
a home to live Wrong verb form
buying
is
better, because you are sure if you lost the job you Change preposition
in is
doesn't
need to pay for rent and there Correct subject-verb agreement
don't
is
no concerns.
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people
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different personality and Change the verb form
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a verity
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all of them decide in their own circumstances.Submitted by Sobhan Izadi
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