You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • Explain why you would like the job • Give details of why you would be suitable person to employ • Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Mr Smith, I am Nikhil Dhaygude, a resident of Bangalore, India. I am writing

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letter to put forward my candidature for the job advertised in the Australian magazine recently.

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with, I am a highly trained educator with a diploma from a reputed Indian college. I have already worked with 3 other children in the past and all of them are thriving in their lives today.

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, I am current on all the required vaccinations.

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to that, I find working with young minds highly satisfying and soul-enriching. The idea that I will help shape their cognitive process gives me a great sense of purpose. I feel there is no greater joy than that.

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, I was contemplating pursuing higher education in Australia.

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, in my free time, I would like to enrol in a course at the Australian State University.

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, I have been meaning to take up surfing as a hobby and, since Australian shores are known exactly for that, I cannot think of a better place to start. I sincerely hope you find me suitable for the job and hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Nikhil Dhaygude.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

196 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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