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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To waht extent do you agree ot disagree?

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Life in other lands where social members speak a foreign
language
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 can make difficult social and practical issues
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 as speaking and working. I totally agree with
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 opinion due to the reasons that will be discussed in the following paragraphs. In
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 world, a lot of individuals want to immigrate from their own country to other regions for working and living especially
people
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 who live in
third
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 world
countries
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 and want to immigrate to
first
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 worlds
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 as the USA or Canada. As we know global societies speak several languages but the global accent and live
language
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 is
English
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 and performs a key role in social communities because
people
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 who live in other communities have
English
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 courses in school, university, etc. and know
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language
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.
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, if
people
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 do not know
English
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 they cannot go for living and work in other
countries
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 because if they want to go
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 to the Netherlands where
people
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 speak Dutch, immigrants who do not know Dutch must know
English
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 and can communicate with other nations with a global
language
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such
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 as
English
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.
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, in some regions
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 as Hungary most
people
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, especially old
people
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 cannot speak
English
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 and communicate with other
people
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 who can speak
English
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 so if you want to immigrate to
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 Hungary for living and studying, you should know and learn Hungarian a little bit because even little works
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 as buying grocery cannot be successful without the native
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. To sum up, as I explained in the previous paragraphs I totally agree with the opinion that knowing
English
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 especially fluently can help you for living and work and study in other
countries
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 where
people
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 speak other languages and communicate with them with the world’s mother
language
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 and solve your problems in
countries
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 significantly.
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